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               EXT. STANTON'S CAR - NIGHT

               STANTON LARKCOMBE (35), expensive suit, gold Rolex, sits in
               his parked Mercedes staring out the windscreen, on the edge
               of madness.

               An involuntary face twitch.  Stanton's knuckles turn white
               as he grips the steering wheel.

               He's out of the car striding away with purpose.  An
               afterthought.  He stops yards away, turns, sets the alarm
               remotely.

               Realises what he's just done.  Fucking idiot!

               He clicks the alarm off and throws the remote key into a
               bush.



               INT. STAIRWELL - NIGHT

               Stanton storms up the stairs taking the steps four at a
               time, all that time in the gym paying off.

               His mobile rings.  Stanton slides to halt, rips his phone
               from his jacket pocket.  It's the wife.

                                   STANTON
                         Adios.

               Stanton hurls the phone down the stairwell and continues up
               the stairs at pace.



               INT. STAIRWELL, GROUND FLOOR - NIGHT

               The phone shatters on the ground, its ringtone dying a
               digital death squarking its last note in defiance.



               EXT. ROOFTOP - NIGHT

               Stanton slams open the roof door, sweating heavily and
               slightly out of breath.  The door closes slowly behind him.

               Stanton searches his pockets, finds the black marker pen he
               was looking for, turns to the door, scribbles words.

               He steps back to admire his work.



               CLOSE UP: DOOR - "DEAR WORLD, FUCK OFF!!!! LOVE STANTON."

               The pen flies over the side of the building.

               Stanton adjusts his tie and strides to the edge of the
               roof, only to find he's not alone.

               JEAN BONNER (63), slightly overweight wearing a floral
               seventies dress, lunch box and flask by her side, sits on
               the roof edge, feet dangling over the side swinging in the
               breeze, munching on a sandwich.

               Stanton can't believe what he's seeing.

                                   STANTON
                         What the hell are you doing?

               Jean drops her sandwich, startled.

                                   JEAN
                         Oh dear, you did make me jump.

                                   STANTON
                         I hope not.

               Stanton stands, impatient.

                                   STANTON (CONT'D)
                         Well?

                                   JEAN
                         Oh sorry, love, I won't be long.

                                   STANTON
                         Too right you won't, I want you
                         down here this minute.

               Jean has no intention of moving.

                                   STANTON (CONT'D)
                         Come on you old bag, hurry up and
                         move, I don't have all night.

               Jean ignores him.

                                   STANTON (CONT'D)
                         Did you hear me?

                                   JEAN
                         Yes.

                                   STANTON
                         Well?

                                   JEAN
                         Apologise.

               What the hell?

                                   STANTON
                             (questioning)
                         Sorry?

                                   JEAN
                         Apology accepted.

               Stanton, open mouthed astonishment.

                                   JEAN (CONT'D)
                         Too many young people your age
                         have no manners.  It's because of
                         all that techno stuff and
                         nonsense, like those Ibones I've
                         seen on the TV, contact at your
                         fingertips, you have no time to
                         think and that's why you're rude. 
                         You don't have the time to pause
                         and be polite.

               Stanton, convinced Jean's off her rocker.

                                   STANTON
                         Right, well, are you going to
                         move, or what?

                                   JEAN
                         When I'm ready to jump.

               Jean helps herself to another sandwich.

               Stanton struggling not to be overwhelmed with disbelief and
               impatience.

                                   STANTON
                         You can't jump from here, you'll
                         have to find another building.

                                   JEAN
                         Why, what's wrong with this one?

                                   STANTON
                         Because it's mine.

                                   JEAN
                         I don't think so, I got here
                         first.

                                   STANTON
                         Look, this is my building.  I own
                         it, or technically my father-in
                         law does, but it's still my name
                         on the front door, so lets have
                         you down now.

                                   JEAN
                             (confused)
                         You want me to jump?

                                   STANTON
                         No, just out of my way.  I'm in a
                         bloody hurry.

                                   JEAN
                         That'll be the techno.

                                   STANTON
                         The tech what?  Look, just get
                         out of my way.

                                   JEAN
                         You're being rude again.

                                   STANTON
                             (exasperated)
                         OK, I'm sorry, but if you could
                         just get up from the ledge and
                         make your way down the stairs
                         that would be lovely.

               Jean takes a bite of her sandwich.

                                   JEAN
                         As I said, I was here first.

               Stanton silently does his nut behind her.

                                   JEAN (CONT'D)
                         Why don't you try another side of
                         the roof?

                                   STANTON
                         Because I fucking want to jump
                         from this one.

                                   JEAN
                         Oh dear, such language.  The suit
                         doesn't make the man.

               If Stanton waves his arms about any faster he'll take off.

                                   STANTON
                         Right, try and understand this. 
                         The right side of the building is
                         an alley.  If I jump there I
                         might not be found for weeks and
                         by that time the rats will have
                         half eaten me.  The back of the
                         building leads on to another roof
                         and the left side has railings
                         down the side of it.  I don't
                         fancy being impaled, if I did I'd
                         thrown myself at my wife's sharp
                         tongue.  The front's the only
                         option.

                                   JEAN
                         And it has such a lovely view
                         too.

                                   STANTON
                         Are you fucking mad?  You're here
                         to kill yourself not see the
                         fucking sights.

                                   JEAN
                         I'm going to stop talking to you
                         if you keep swearing.

               Stanton jumps up and down barely keeping a lid on his
               frustration.  He takes a couple of deep breaths to calm
               himself down, he can sort this.

                                   STANTON
                         So why do you want to jump?

                                   JEAN
                         Why do you want to know?

                                   STANTON
                         Well maybe your reason isn't as
                         urgent as mine in which case I
                         should be the one jumping.  You
                         could come back another day.
                         Tomorrow, maybe?

                                   JEAN
                         Oh, I'm sure my reason is quite
                         urgent.

                                   STANTON
                         I doubt it.  I bet you haven't
                         just lost two million of your
                         father-in-law's company's money.

                                   JEAN
                         Oh dear, you have been a naughty
                         boy, haven't you.

               Stanton waits for Jean to give her reason, she just helps
               herself to another sandwich.

                                   STANTON
                         Well?

                                   JEAN
                         Pardon?

                                   STANTON
                         Your reason?

                                   JEAN
                         For what?

                                   STANTON
                         Why you're here?

                                   JEAN
                         Oh, that's private.

               Stanton, annoyed as hell.  He can sort this by reason, he
               just needs to think.  He comes to a decision.

               Stanton strides forward, determined.  He jumps up onto the
               ledge and sits down beside Jean.  Jean isn't very happy
               he's invaded her space.

                                   JEAN (CONT'D)
                         You're not going to try and jump
                         with me, are you?

                                   STANTON
                         Suicide is not really something
                         you can share.

                                   JEAN
                         And you're not going to jump
                         before me?

                                   STANTON
                         Only one of us is going to jump
                         tonight, we've just got to decide
                         who.

               Jean offers him a sandwich, Stanton declines.

                                   STANTON (CONT'D)
                         What's with the sandwiches
                         anyway?

                                   JEAN
                         I like that CSI program on the
                         TV, always tape it.  When they do
                         one of those autopsy things they
                         always check the contents of the
                         stomach.  Did you know you can
                         tell a lot about a person by the
                         contents of their stomach?

                                   STANTON
                         No, I never knew that.

                                   JEAN
                         So I thought what would my
                         stomach contents say about me.  I
                         decided fish and chips wasn't the
                         way I wanted to go.  Cucumber
                         sandwiches and Earl Grey tea
                         speaks with a little more class.

               Stanton shakes his head at Jean's loopy logic.

                                   STANTON
                         Look, I'll give you my watch if
                         you go home and let me jump.

               He hands it to her.

                                   STANTON (CONT'D)
                         It's a Rolex.

                                   JEAN
                         Pretty little thing, but I won't
                         need it after I jump, so it's a
                         bit useless.

               Stanton takes the watch back, offers his hand to Jean.

                                   STANTON
                         Stanton by the way.

               She shakes it.

                                   JEAN
                         Jean.

                                   STANTON
                         Well, Jean, this can't go on, I
                         fully intend being the only one
                         to jump tonight and I don't want
                         you raining on my parade, so to
                         speak.

                                   JEAN
                         As I said...

                                   STANTON
                         I know, you were here first.  So
                         what are we going to do?

                                   JEAN
                         Well jump I thought?

                                   STANTON
                         Jump yes, but how are we going to
                         figure out who?

                                   JEAN
                         But I was...

                                   STANTON
                         Yes, I know.

               Jean sips her tea.

                                   JEAN
                         So how do you lose two million
                         pounds?

                                   STANTON
                         A few bad investments.

                                   JEAN
                         Bad?

                                   STANTON
                         Horses that couldn't run.

                                   JEAN
                         Ooh, I've always wanted to own a
                         horse.

                                   STANTON
                         Right.  So, any idea how we're
                         going to solve this?

                                   JEAN
                         I was here...

                                   STANTON
                         ...first.  No need to keep going
                         on about it!

                                   JEAN
                         Would you like a cup of tea?

               Stanton nods, might as well.

               Jean hands him a cup.  He sips it... not bad.

                                   JEAN (CONT'D)
                         Why are you always so angry?

                                   STANTON
                         If you were married to my wife
                         you would be angry too.

                                   JEAN
                         I bet she's not that bad.

               Stanton relaxes.

                                   STANTON
                         No, she's not really.  It's her
                         father.

                                   JEAN
                         Interferes does he?

                                   STANTON
                         All the bloody time.

                                   JEAN
                         Then why do you work for him?

                                   STANTON
                         Sometimes I wonder that myself.

                                   JEAN
                         You could always start your own
                         business.

               Stanton shrugs, nonplussed.

                                   JEAN (CONT'D)
                         You like gambling, you could
                         become a stockbroker, make
                         millions and give loads to
                         charity and a little boy in
                         Africa called Joseph won't die of
                         hunger and will be able to go on
                         to fulfil his destiny and lead
                         his nation out of poverty.

               Stanton stares at her.  Who *is* this mad woman?  Jean
               smiles.

                                   JEAN (CONT'D)
                         All things are possible.

                                   STANTON
                         They found out today.

                                   JEAN
                         About the missing money... what
                         did your wife and her father say?

                                   STANTON
                         I don't know, I didn't hang
                         around to find out.

                                   JEAN
                         But they might not be too upset
                         with you.

                                   STANTON
                         Yeah right!

                                   JEAN
                         So how do you know?

                                   STANTON
                         I stole two million, I doubt they
                         want to promote me.

                                   JEAN
                         But you don't actually know?

               Jean's got Stanton thinking.

                                   STANTON
                         No, but I'm sure.  If I nicked
                         two million off you would you be
                         happy about it?

               He's not so confident now he's calmed down.

                                   JEAN
                         I don't have two million.

               Stanton looks at her dress.  That's obvious!

                                   STANTON
                         Nah, they'll call the police and
                         everything.

                                   JEAN
                         I don't hear any sirens.  And it
                         was only two million.  I'm sure
                         your father-in-law has plenty
                         more.

                                   STANTON
                         Shit loads.

                                   JEAN
                         There you go then.

               Stanton smiles, amazed at himself and Jean's undeniable
               logic.

                                   STANTON
                         Yeah, maybe I will go and check
                         things out, come back tomorrow.

                                   JEAN
                         The roof will still be here.

               Stanton looks at Jean properly for the first time, hugs
               her, genuine warmth.

                                   STANTON
                         Have a good one, Jean.

               Stanton stands and walks to the stairwell.

                                   STANTON (CONT'D)
                         Stockbroker..?  Yeah, I like the
                         sound of that.

               Stanton enters the stairwell.  Jean smiles to herself.

                                   JEAN
                         Have a good life, Stanton, and
                         thank you.

               Jean stands, a halo appears around her head, and two
               glorious wings unfold themselves from her back carrying
               Jean into the night's sky.

                                                            FADE OUT.
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